I was able to collect feedback from my teacher and she said that to improve my ident I will need to do the following:
Ident 1.
- When London eye comes on have the music comes on the music come on earlier.
- What has the football got to do with anything?
- The transition to the same shot is weird.
- Is walking scene supposed to be a shot from Homes Under The Hammer?
Ident 2.
- Again, start the music on the second shot earlier.
- Time lapse is amazing. Get rid of the water effect.
- Get rid of the text about "Now it's time for".
- Why do we get a random shot of three people?
- With the voiceover you stated, "We will be with you in just a few.". You will need to get rid of it or replace it with something different as BBC One is very formal.
- Why are there 3 people on the computer?
- There should be a logo at the end, the same as BBC One.
To improve my ident, I will use these improvements as my teacher's feedback was useful and made sense.
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